I wake up one morning earlier than I usually would. The sun has not even fully risen. I lie awake in bed trying to persuade my unconscious mind into succumbing to sleep once again, but it eventually wins out and forces me out of my bed. I get dressed and make my way downstairs. I make a bowl of cereal and start to eat it in silence. After a few bites, I decide to turn on the TV. I walk into the living room to get the remote, but I am surprised by what I find sitting next to it on the couch. I find a corpse sitting there looking as if he is just relaxing. I stand still staring at it, not knowing who the body belonged to or what I was supposed to do about it. I eventually decide that I should call 911 and tell them that I’ve found a dead body sitting on my couch which they immediately question, but I have no answers for them. I finish the phone call and proceed to do the same with my cereal. After doing so, ambulances and police cars pull up with sirens blaring. I open the door to let them in. The paramedics confirm that the body is in fact a dead one though I felt pretty confident in my personal assessment of the body’s state of being. The police officers questioned me, but I had as many solid answers as I did minutes earlier on the phone. They eventually put the body in an ambulance which I found ironic and drove him away. As they drive away, I go back into my bedroom, brush my teeth as well as my hair, and just finish preparing to leave in general. I look down at my watch and realize that it’s time for me to leave. I go to head out the door, but realize that I don’t have my car keys. I check the kitchen counter, my beside table, and just about everywhere else that I’d think they could be. I look over my living room and see my key chain poking up between two couch cushions. I grab them, but as I do so, I smell something awful. I hold my breath, and get outside. I sigh to myself and hope that getting my couch cleaned won’t be too expensive. I then get in my car and drive to work.
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I love how distinct you style has become to me. Like, I can tell when a piece is yours. When you have this voice with characters like you do in this piece, there a short and simple sentences, but they’re great because they put the reader in the mindset of the narrator/characters. This is a really great piece!
I have so many questions as to who, what, and why!! You should do a series of these with no real answer/ending.
the way your stories flow always go so smoothly. Like it makes it hard to see the main topic, but I think that’s what I like most about it. How it mentions the dead body but quickly goes to something different. I think it really shapes the flow of your stories and gives you a unique writing style.
Solid post, though I don’t think I understood it correctly. I like how nonchalant it is, especially when the story is dealing with so much death.