I have my father’s teeth, but my mother’s bite
This makes me good at fighting,
And bad at everything else
I snap bones
Draw blood
Break hearts
And still I swear I’m more of a lover than a fighter
More of a loser than a winner.
The kind of guy that only wants you when you don’t want him
The kind of girl that wants only what doesn’t belong to her
The kind of guy you write angry poetry about
The kind of girl you write breakup songs for
The kind of guy you don’t take home to your parents
The kind of girl who can’t be owned
This scared you.
Fight or flight?
You were never a fan of heights
So you hit
And you missed
And I dodged
And I fell
Deeper
And deeper
And you jumped in after me
Still swinging and kicking
Swinging and kicking
‘I’ve gotta keep you on your toes’ you’d say
But I had fallen head first
Deeper
And deeper
I was too old for fighting by the time you caught up with me
By that time I was good for nothing
And you were good for everything
‘When are we going to fight?’
When are you going to start saying what you mean
‘Hit me’
Kiss me
‘Don’t look at me like that’
Make me
You hurt to look at
Must be love
Or at least that’s what my friends say
I don’t think love is supposed to hurt
I don’t see a point in that
Other types of love don’t hurt
So why should this
We always end up in this position
With you over me
Gives you a false sense of security
That you’re the one in control
I let you believe it
I, a wolf in sheep’s clothing
You, an angel in disguise
Y’know
Like that song you like
By that artist I love
‘You’re lying’
If I was you wouldn’t be able to tell.
‘Does this mean choke?’
You know it doesn’t
‘Coward’
Maybe
Dog bites and bee stings got nothing on you babe
But you’re still one of my favorite things
Scarier than any horror movie
Scarier than that dream I had last night
Scarier than your mom
We would have never worked
But we didn’t need the cards to tell us that
Did we
I can only love in ways you don’t know how
Swinging and kicking
Even skeletons need more than skinny love
Swinging and kicking
Red and blue
Swinging and kicking
But your drop was shallow
‘I do like you’
Deeper
And deeper
‘But we could never be together.’
Deeper
And deeper
I love your poetry. Very meaningful stuff you got here, man. I wish I had the same rhythm you write with, the flow is perfectly fitting to the content involved. Great work.
They way you started this poem really works and sets the mood for the rest of the poem. I also love the characters and how you describe their love. The repetition of screaming and kicking does something good for this poem, and so does the description and dialogue.
This is really really great and held my interest throughout its entirety.
I love how passionate and strong this starts out and how sensitive it seemed to be at the end. This was really great.