{"id":19308,"date":"2024-03-07T13:04:00","date_gmt":"2024-03-07T19:04:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/?p=19308"},"modified":"2024-03-07T13:27:45","modified_gmt":"2024-03-07T19:27:45","slug":"i-need-your-opinion-pls","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/2024\/03\/07\/i-need-your-opinion-pls\/","title":{"rendered":"I need your opinion pls"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

The process of creating a poem is one that I wish that I even had close to down. It\u2019s one of those things that are pretty much as sporadic as the mood swings that I wish I could overcome. Anyway, I didn\u2019t mean to go that deep into a tangent in such a short amount of time. When it comes to my own personal development of artistic literary pieces it is always usually dictated off of one factor, that being the title, and whether I think of the idea for the poem itself first, or whether I think of the title first. For this specific piece that I am going to be sharing today I decided on the title first. This wasn\u2019t because I couldn\u2019t think of what to write (it was) but because I thought of it and how many metaphorical vises I could attach to it. But anyway here is the poem itself, I want to hear all of your opinions and process though too. I will touch on that in a second.<\/span><\/p>\n

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Pomegranate seed<\/b>\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

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Love me like a pomegranate seed<\/span><\/p>\n

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An aperture of translucence.<\/span><\/p>\n

A reddish glow.<\/span><\/p>\n

Shapes crafted ever so<\/span><\/p>\n

meticulously that it\u2019s<\/span><\/p>\n

as if it was molded<\/span><\/p>\n

at the fingertips of<\/span><\/p>\n

Gaea herself.<\/span><\/p>\n

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Love me even though none of that matters.<\/span><\/p>\n

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For the beauty of<\/span><\/p>\n

an individual seed does<\/span><\/p>\n

not span beyond the\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

confines of the fruit\u2019s rind.<\/span><\/p>\n

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As does the beauty<\/span><\/p>\n

of any physical being,<\/span><\/p>\n

when left in a room<\/span><\/p>\n

full of people.<\/span><\/p>\n

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500 seeds to a single fruit.<\/span><\/p>\n

My beauty is not my own.<\/span><\/p>\n

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Yet it is I who is awarded with the privilege of your love.<\/span><\/p>\n



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Whether you like or hate this poem is one thing, I don’t even know if I like it but I hope the publication I submitted to likes it enough.\u00a0 But anyway there are a couple things that I wanted to touch on when it comes to the process of writing poems. For the most part I think that majority of the things in which I have written have originated not from a title but from an overall idea of the piece. However this one does not specifically possess that same background, and to be honest I am not exactly sure if I need to do any other poems like this, I know it is important to have a strong basis however I don\u2019t think that there was for this piece, it was only the two words that created the title. So I just want to hear everyones opinion on itt. :))))<\/span><\/p>\n

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The process of creating a poem is one that I wish that I even had close to down. It\u2019s one of those things that are pretty much as sporadic as the mood swings that I wish I could overcome. Anyway, I didn\u2019t mean to go that deep into a tangent in such a short amount … Continue reading “I need your opinion pls”<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":90,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[4],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19308"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/90"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=19308"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19308\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":19310,"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19308\/revisions\/19310"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=19308"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=19308"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blog.msabrookhaven.org\/literary\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=19308"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}